Haiku
Haiku
Haiku is a compact poetic form that captures a single, vivid moment in just three lines. It favors concrete images, sensory details, and a feeling of immediacy over explanation.
Core features
- Structure: 3 lines. Traditional Japanese haiku use 17 sound units (on) in a 5–7–5 pattern. In English, many haiku roughly follow 5–7–5 syllables, but modern haiku often use fewer syllables and focus on image and contrast rather than strict counting.
- Kigo (season word): A word or phrase that suggests a season or time of year (e.g., cherry blossoms for spring, cicadas for summer, red leaves for autumn, first snow for winter).
- Kireji (cut): A “cut” or break that sets two parts of the poem in relation to each other—often marked by a strong line break or punctuation.
Typical tone
- Quiet, observational, rooted in everyday life and nature
- Suggestive rather than explanatory
- Uses simple, concrete language; strong nouns and verbs, minimal adjectives and adverbs
Classic shape (fragment + phrase)
- One short fragment (often one line) that gives a sharp image or context
- One longer phrase (two lines) that adds movement, detail, or a second image
The tension or connection between fragment and phrase creates the emotional or intellectual "spark" of the haiku.
Personal writing guidelines
- Start from a real moment you’ve noticed (a sound, a flicker of light, a small movement).
- Show the scene through specific images and sensations; avoid explaining the emotion.
- Include at least a hint of season or time, when possible.
- Make sure there’s a clear “cut” or pivot where the poem shifts.
- Read aloud to feel the rhythm and see if any words can be removed while keeping the image strong.